Survivors::The Broken Path::Chapter 3 Page 43

So someone finally helped my with smoother outlines, I've been meaning to change outlines for a long time, problem is I didn't know how, but thanks to the help of the outline are now easier for me to draw and somewhat a lot faster So now no more big outline, it will take some getting use to- oh what the hell, at this rate I'm sure my artwork will be at a new level ^w^

Okay there are two things I wanna say about the characters in this scene, one related to this scene and one or should two in general, mainly with Beetle and Thorn which I'll start with them.

You wanna know what really grinds my gears? Is that every since Beetle and Thorn made their appearance in the first series in Hidden Enemy, is that their description keeps freaking changing! Even their genders were changed at one point in the third book. I know its that some of these are just errors from book editing but come on Hunter, you gotta at least stop changing the description of the characters so much (This also goes for Warrior cats too! Like Firestar was just full ginger in the cover of the first book and later he's all striped ginger >~< ) Seriously, I couldn't tell who's who during the whole series! That Beetle was black and white, Thorn was all black, than later Beetle was black with a white chest and Thorn was full black and white with black paws etc. I finally got to the point when I said ''Screw it! I'll just stick with what the book will say if sounds official to me" So in Storm of Dogs when Thorn was described that she looked like her mother Moon and I thought of Beetle being full on black cause of his name, I made my choice and stuck what I think of them now permanently. Even if their description changes again or that a different description from my thought of them has change and is official, I'm sticking what I think they look like >~<

Okay enough of the mixed up dogs, now we lets talk about Alpha/Dog/Wolf in this scene. As some may know from those who read Alpha's Tale or have seen one of my fan art of Alpha's own naming ceremony----> . He's own ceremony wasn't a really fair one and due to Wolf Pack laws, he wasn't allowed to choose his name. I guess in this scene Alpha/Dog/Wolf was glad that Squirm (Beetle) and Nose (Thorn) were able to choose their own names and unlike the Alpha in his wolf pack, he didn't the two pups go through the same hurt of unfairness he went through and wanted be better than his wolf alpha was to him. (Yeah right, tell that to poor Storm)

Characters and Story (c) by Erin Hunter
Art-(c) Me